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Lokno

Age/Gender: 25, Male
Location: Maryland
Job: Student

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1/31/05

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All Flash Reviews

6 Reviews | 4 w/ Responses

Score: 9
Element trailer

"Intriguing Flash Anime"

submission: Element trailer
date: March 30, 2005

This is some incredible stuff. It seems a bit out of place in Flash, which doesn't allow for the sort of shading and effects so important to action anime. But many anime-style techiques were used in the timing and executed as well as one can using vector art and a timeline.

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Score: 8
The Real Legend of Zelda2

"Fun and Humorous"

date: March 30, 2005

I was impressed by this. I liked the style, and a lot of the gags were hilarious. Also good to see something pro-Navi for a change. The overall flow of the piece was a little choppy, and some of the scenes seemed a tad rushed. Otherwise great stuff.

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Score: 5
Eggmaker V1.0

"Go Dye an Easter Egg for Real."

submission: Eggmaker V1.0
date: March 27, 2005

Basic egg maker, nothing new or interesting here. Perhapes it would have been better if you could choose from more things, and if the things that you put on the egg would shape to it.

Author's Response:

Like I said, if this does ok, I'm going to make a bigger one. Thank you for playing it. :)

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Score: 2
Space Game -NLS-

"In space, no one can hear you scream"

submission: Space Game -NLS-
date: March 27, 2005

But I'm going to damn well scream anyway. Seriously, this a pretty low quality thing you've got here. I would have waited to submit something worthwhile. The incoming objects hit the ship when they don't even seem to be touching, and the endlessness of it doesn't make it interesting in the least, so no high score for you. The ship movement is too simple, even for space. And what is that cursor doing on the screen after the menu? This will probably be deleted. Try harder next time.

Author's Response:

I doubt it will be blammed...but I do agree..I didn't really need to submit this. Now that I think of it, I don't know why I did lol. oh well if I ever make a decent game Maybe I'll submit that.

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Score: 3
LoZ - The Final Link

"One Problem - Link is not Neo"

date: March 25, 2005

I agree with some of the other reviews that this really doesn't have any good reason to be based on Zelda (fanfiction aside), and when compared to the series it doesn't hold up. Perhapes you loved the third Matrix movie more then anything else on God's green Earth, but that doesn't mean you have to be bring Link into it; he doesn't have to fly, and he doesn't have to dress like this is his big interview. If you love the series so much, I don't see why you need to give it a Killer 7 Matrix make over. I hate to tell you this, but if you take Link out of this tunic and hat he's just some guy with a sword. You may as well make him a chick with a gun.

Author's Response:

chick with a gun - ill use that in my next one :-P but yeah, ive said this before, this is merely an extension of the story - this isnt supposed to have a LoZ feel because up until now LoZ has been cartoony and for kids - the only reason i love it so much and have stuck with the series (as i imagine many of my generation has) is because we grew up with the originals - of course this isnt zelda-like, cause its dark - plus i made it take place years later so they live in a culture where people dont wear tunics and funny hats - in fact, they dress like we do
-btw, the matrix 3 was SHIT - lost my respect entirely, they shoulda just left the first one be - but im not a millionaire director, so i dont need to explain everything - just accept the flash for what it is - a neat movie - and how can you say 'fanfiction aside' ? thats exactly what this is - im a fan, and this is MY piece of fiction

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Score: 4
Titanik

"Anachronistic Satire not a lot of laughs"

submission: Titanik
date: March 25, 2005

I don't feel this is all that funny. Notice that the people you've mentioned who will attempt to correct your history are the only people who will realize your work is historically wrong in the first place. Therefore, the audience doesn’t think it’s funny that it’s wrong - they think it’s a problem. Maybe if it was more off the wall, like Iron warships or Vikings. The trouble is someone could possibly believe this, seeing that it’s all taken from the 20th Century. Also, you shouldn’t clip your background sound so suddenly; try editing in fade-outs. Other than that I think your style is decent enough, and the animation is pretty sound. Good luck on your future projects.

Author's Response:

Y'know, I never thought of it that way...you've made a really good point there. Perhaps it wasn't "over-the-top" enough. (kinda weird when Hitler announcing that the fall of the Titanic will bring about the end of Poland isn't over-the-top enough) Good thoughts, thanks for the review.

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